spot1_Westcliff University Commercial 2021


  1. Jonathan on July 15, 2021 at 7:07 am

    Hi Lee, thanks for the opportunity!

  2. Lee Lawrence on July 15, 2021 at 12:23 pm

    Hi Jonathan! Thanks for the read. Although you did a good job, it’s a bit more authoritative in tone than we are looking for. I’d like to have you try another read sounding a bit younger and conversational in style (as a young college student would.) The VO in this commercial has the kind of tone we are looking for:

    Overall, the pace needs to be sped up a bit. If you could read the first line without pausing until “DNA..” so the inflection goes down instead of up, that will help set the platform for the rest following.

    Hopefully these comments help you some. Thanks for your help!