I have this saved in a WAV file if needed
most of it sounds pretty good but I did like how your voice sounded better in the Porsche ad?
The first ad you said west it should be “to browse the wests (plural) largest collection of art, — AND ALSO: Jacksons – it should just be Jackson (not plural) Wyomings town square:
“Visit our location near Jackson, Wyoming’s town square”
Give me a slower read on this one too where I might leave out (I’ll just have this with wording on screen) (Make it a 30 sec slower read without the last line: Join us on August 24th as we celebrate our 55th anniversary – please re-read this line slower too as I might leave out other lines –
and in the 2nd add the beginning Trailside Gallery is …. sounds different from the rest of the read??? and also at the end… the Persephone is pronounced: per-seff-in-ees bakery
Wav files would be better too – Thanks Much, Mike Emmer, Bridger Productions, Inc.